Kenpachi Masamune

Though that was the old style, description and elegance superseded practical flow. If you are going to appreciate the old style then you need to be well-versed in many subjects ...

As I was reading it wasn't exactly captivating, there is little substance and soul to the character, the way you write is very passive and does not grab a hold ...

If it was poetic then this would be good, it just lamenting prose that is unrefined being called a poem. This sounds almost disturbingly familiar to generic cries for help ...